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Working on Chapter 14. I have reread and re-edited chapter 13 to improve syntax.
Corey Firestone goes to Albuquerque, and spends a night with his grandmother, Ellen...and has sex with her.
I resubmitted my poem with a couple of revisions, in hopes of making the poem more meaningful. It has been brought to my attention that it has shown up as a new story. I thought I was resubmitting it on the site as a resubmission of an existing "story", but SOL did not allow me to submit it that way and I had to go the other way. I hope by sending this blog I can alert my readers that it is not new, but improved, though only slightly.
Peter
For those of you interested in my poetry. I have changed "Orally Yours" to read in a meaningful manner. I don't know if everybody who writes poetry goes about it the same way, but often when I reread my poetry I change it to be what I consider to be more meaningful.
Thank you for reading my work,
Peter Duncan
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