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I fear that AI is going to kill real literature

Justin Case 🚫

Pretty much summed up by title, but I will kinda elaborate…

I hear people saying the following comments already:

-Real authors' work will be pushed aside by the tsunami of AI "fake" literature.
-Real authors will be waysided by gozillions of illiterate hacks flooding the market with trash.
-Real authors will be replaced (for the most part) by anyone with an AI generator.
-Real writers art will face extinction due to the ease that lazy people can create fluff.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Justin Case

In a feature in yesterday's paper, it was claimed that AI written literature still has a long way to go until it is indistinguishable from that of a human author, but AI generated 'replacement' actors are here now.

AJ

Replies:   ystokes  joyR  Switch Blayde
ystokes 🚫

@awnlee jawking

but AI generated 'replacement' actors are here now.

Not to mention all the studio set builders being replaced by green screen.

joyR 🚫
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@awnlee jawking

AI generated 'replacement' actors are here now.

Not a new concept. Looker (1981) Film plot included 'AI' models/actresses.

ETA

Before my time, but mentioned in "Castle in the Sand"

Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

but AI generated 'replacement' actors are here now.

That's one of the points the actors' union is making in their strike. They say an actor would get paid one time and then his image would be used over and over again without him getting paid.

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DBActive 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

My daughter works as a background actor (extra.)

Before the SAG/AFTRA strike she had already been asked to sign waivers permitting scanning her image and using it in perpetuity. She didn't agree.

If the producers get their way, all of the background and day players will be AI generated images.

Mat Twassel 🚫

@Justin Case

If it's truly literature, why is that a problem?

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Mat Twassel

If it's truly literature, why is that a problem?

For a self-published author, sites like Amazon's KDP will be flooded with AI generated novels.

doctor_wing_nut 🚫

@Justin Case

If A.I. knows the difference between 'then' and 'than', it could mercifully replace some people right now.

Please.

Pixy 🚫

@Justin Case

I think flesh and blood writers are safe for a few years yet...

https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/newsbeat-66266344

tblev2011 🚫

@Justin Case

I believe AI generated stories would be about as creative as a sloppily painted river rock. Sure it's cute, yeah it's something - but it'll leave us wanting more. No twists, no depth, flat characters, generic world building if any at all.
I'm still waiting for those self-driving trucks to replace me, and that may be a long way off if it truly ever happens. Doubt it. Same situation and scenario, critical thinking.

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy 🚫

@tblev2011

I'm still waiting for those self-driving trucks to replace me

https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-edinburgh-east-fife-65589913

If they can make buses work, then HGV's will not be far behind. probably the first to adopt will be the main supermarkets, as they will only be required to drive from depot to store.

Where drivers may be retained, will be on multi-drop and those loads requiring roping and sheeting, along with outsize loads.

In fact, out of curiosity, I have just tried a quick Google search and it shows they are already trialling autonomous tractor units. https://motortransport.co.uk/blog/2022/01/25/autonomous-terberg-electric-hgv-to-be-driven-remotely-in-final-mile-5g-trial/

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@Pixy

https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-edinburgh-east-fife-65589913

Less 'driver less', more 'hands free':

Despite the "driverless" name, the buses operate with two staff on board.
One will sit in the driver's seat to monitor the technology, and a so-called bus captain will help passengers with boarding and buying tickets.

Replies:   awnlee jawking  Tw0Cr0ws
awnlee jawking 🚫

@joyR

bus captain

They used to be called conductors when I was young. Good to see they're being reintroduced, whatever they're called.

AJ

Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

@joyR

Despite the "driverless" name, the buses operate with two staff on board.
One will sit in the driver's seat to monitor the technology, and a so-called bus captain will help passengers with boarding and buying tickets.

So, a more expensive bus plus two human employees to operate it vs a standard bus with one person behind the wheel driving and handling boarding and payment?
In any part of the world where public transportation has a limited budget I do not see that catching on.

Replies:   awnlee jawking  joyR
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Tw0Cr0ws

a standard bus with one person behind the wheel driving and handling boarding and payment?

I wonder whether that has backfired to some extent.

Quite often drivers have to fiddle with their technology to convert the passenger's requested destination into a stop number so they can issue the correct ticket, and nowadays many people pay by smartphone which they don't have prepped when the bus arrives, so the driver has to wait while the passenger loads up the right app etc. It seems to me that despite all the technology involved, it takes longer on average to process each passenger than before.

AJ

joyR 🚫

@Tw0Cr0ws

So, a more expensive bus plus two human employees to operate it vs a standard bus with one person behind the wheel driving and handling boarding and payment?

It gets better;

Police Scotland has invested close to Β£20 million in electric vehicles (EVs) for the Force – but 23 of the police stations provided with cars have not got any charging points.

That's according to the Scottish Liberal Democrats, which stated that it retrieved this information under the Freedom of Information Act.

Source

POLICE blew up a wall socket after trying to power their fleet of electric motors by passing cables through station windows.

Officers resorted to the desperate move after 23 cop shops in Scotland were given the eco cars β€” but nowhere handy to top them up.

Source

A FLEET of 75 new electric vehicles bought by Police Scotland has been kept in storage for around eight months but the force has denied that a lack of charging stations has stopped them from being deployed.
Old diesel cars were used instead, with the EVs left at council car parks overnight "in the hope no damage would come to them".

Source

Sarkasmus 🚫
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@Justin Case

I hear people saying the following comments already:

-Real authors' work will be pushed aside by the tsunami of AI "fake" literature.

Reminds me of that article from last month, where they found out that amazon's bestseller lists are completely dominated by AI-Generated nonsense books:

https://www.vice.com/en/article/v7b774/ai-generated-books-of-nonsense-are-all-over-amazons-bestseller-lists

But, I said it before and I'll say it again:

AI is nothing more than a search engine with a proper speech model. It can't create anything new. It can't come up with anything. It can only reword information it previously received.

If you ask an AI to "write" you an essay on Elon Musk, it will give you the highlights of his wikipedia page. Why? Because, despite what the media-hype is making people believe, it's far more A than I. It doesn't fact check. It isn't capable of fanzasizing. It can't analyze anything beyond weighing occurance rates.

The first person to ask for an essay about Elon Musk only got to learn about his involvement in TESLA, since that is the most dominant part in said wikipedia page. Then the "operator" can ask the AI why it didn't include SpaceX, so the AI learns that this information would be wanted and will include it in its answer when the next person asks for an essay of Elon Musk. And that's how the thing works. It's basically Google with the ability to form sentences instead of handing you a list of the search results it thinks would interest you the most.

Consequently, if you ask ChatGPT to write you a vampire story, chances are the MC will be a guy called Edward...

I just wish people would stop freaking out about it.

In my opinion, the only true consequence of the onslaught of trash AI-stories, will be the rise of critics. People will pay far more attention to recommendations and ratings to avoid paying for those lazy nonsense books.

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks 🚫

@Sarkasmus

Consequently, if you ask ChatGPT to write you a vampire story, chances are the MC will be a guy called Edward...

I have asked it on several occasions (playing around) to generate character bios. The teen girl seems to always be named 'Emma'.

REP 🚫
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@Justin Case

I don't know much about AIs writing stories. What I do know has been gleaned from SOL's Forum.

The one thing an AI 'author' lacks that a human author has is creativity. I doubt that human authors have much to fear in the near future.

However, I should qualify my opinion by saying there are human authors that need to be concerned now. These are the authors who write a sex scene and then replicate it multiple times and change the names of the characters having sex with the MC and modifying the description of the sex acts performed or the order in which the acts are performed. The human authors seem to use this 'technique' to create a high page count containing nothing but sex scenes, and then present it as a story.

I do my best to avoid this type of story for it has no real plot; just an undeveloped reason for stringing together a series of sex scenes.

irvmull 🚫
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@Justin Case

The one thing an AI 'author' lacks that a human author has is creativity. I doubt that human authors have much to fear in the near future.

Looks like that lawyer found out that AI can be too creative, making up all sorts of court decisions for cases that did not exist.

Replies:   REP
REP 🚫

@irvmull

Can you imagine a lawyer not checking the court decisions he is using to ensure the decisions support their case.

That person must not have been much of a lawyer. I wouldn't want them to represent me.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Justin Case

Milla Sofia looks like your average influencer. She's 19 years old, blond and has almost 100,000 followers on TikTok. The twist is that she doesn't actually exist.

Sofia may claim to be from Finland and post bikini pictures from trips to Greece and Bora Bora, but she's actually a "virtual influencer and fashion model" generated by artificial intelligence.

Article at: https://www.yahoo.com/lifestyle/social-media-is-fawning-over-19-year-old-influencer-milla-sofia--but-shes-not-even-real-000349854.html

Replies:   Grey Wolf  Switch Blayde
Grey Wolf 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Which is, in the end, some real people with creativity using tools.

My hope (not my belief, sadly) is that this will help a bit in inoculating people against the idea that, if you can see it, it exists. That's no longer the case. It hasn't been the case for a while, really, but now the technology is widespread.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Grey Wolf

if you can see it, it exists.

Or if you read it, it's true.

Replies:   Grey Wolf
Grey Wolf 🚫

@Switch Blayde

That's been false for centuries. The failure of people to understand that is a longstanding problem, sadly.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Since the AI generated Milla Sofia is hot, and the U.S. Copyright Office says you cannot copyright AI generated material, I wonder if I can use her generated images on my book cover.

Replies:   joyR  irvmull
joyR 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I wonder if I can use her

Make sure you choose an image that does not show her fingers, or crop them out. Especially the one in which she has six fingers on one hand.

KimLittle 🚫

@joyR

Make sure you choose an image that does not show her fingers, or crop them out. Especially the one in which she has six fingers on one hand.

Unless the story involves how good it feels to get a hand-shandy from a bird with six fingers.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@joyR

she has six fingers on one hand.

Years ago, in the days of the IBM mainframe, I saw a cartoon where one person was introducing a man to someone with 8 fingers on each hand and the caption said:

"This is Joe. He's our hexadecimal expert."

Replies:   joyR  Scribbler
joyR 🚫

@Switch Blayde

So his brother, who has no fingers on one hand and only one on the other is their binary expert…?

Scribbler 🚫

@Switch Blayde

the caption said:

"This is Joe. He's our hexadecimal expert."

Programmer: Count to 5

Confused Op: One...

Programmer: Stop. you have to start with zero...

awnlee jawking 🚫

@joyR

Does she have a penis?

Labour leader Keir Starmer reckons 1 in 1000 women have a penis.

AJ

Replies:   joyR
joyR 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Note to Starmer.

When a woman shouts "cocksucker" at you, it is NOT an invitation…!

The 999 shouting "asshole" are using it as both a verb and an adjective.

irvmull 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

Since the AI generated Milla Sofia is hot, and the U.S. Copyright Office says you cannot copyright AI generated material, I wonder if I can use her generated images on my book cover.

Just generate your own, with stable diffusion.

It's really not very difficult. The important thing to remember is never use a well-known person's name as part of your description. That avoids generating images that look too much like someone who would sue you.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@irvmull

Just generate your own, with stable diffusion.

I must be AI challenged. I've tried a couple and couldn't get an image anything like I was after.

Replies:   irvmull  Grey Wolf
irvmull 🚫

@Switch Blayde

It does take some experimenting, but eventually you can get some very good results - and I'm not talking about just the artsy-fartsy fantasy illustrations you most often see as examples on line, although obviously it's good for that if that's what you need.

Can you describe what sort of illustration you'd want for that cover?

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@irvmull

Can you describe what sort of illustration you'd want for that cover?

Nothing at the moment.

Grey Wolf 🚫

@Switch Blayde

The truth seems to be (from my own experimentation) that to get most outcomes it's a matter of both some fairly serious prompting skills and often using 'inpainting' and other techniques to essentially freeze part of the scene while developing the rest of it.

Which means that generating most (but not all) non-trivial images is actually a creative work, which is almost certainly going to be the next step in copyright litigation.

'Yes, your honor, it was generated by an AI. However, it required many hours to develop the prompt. Then I needed to use an editor to mask off a section for inpainting. Filling that section took more hours of prompting. Then there was another round of inpainting."

"Um ... so ..."

Many hours of litigation later, maybe it's creative, maybe it isn't, but it's a far cry from "I typed in 'Make me an awesome piece of cover art with a hot blonde and a hunky guy' and got this. Can I copyright it?"

joyR 🚫
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@Justin Case

-Real authors will be waysided by gozillions of illiterate hacks flooding the market with trash.

-Real authors will be replaced (for the most part) by anyone with an AI generator.

-Real writers art will face extinction due to the ease that lazy people can create fluff.

1476 - "Writers will face extinction if Mr Caxton is allowed to build his infernal machines."

1987 - "Real authors will face extinction due to the growing 'desk top publishing" craze.

Just about anyone could use an AI generator to create text. How close that text is to being called a story depends. Fed the right combination of keywords the AI can generate a story, but that story won't be inspired by imagination, it will be a miss mash of stories already loaded into the AI's data bank.

Theoretically, an infinite number of monkeys given an infinite number of laptops could write the complete works of Shakespeare. Eventually. But who exactly is going to read and be willing to recommend, let alone buy all the dross those monkeys create that isn't the works of Shakespeare?

It is blatantly obvious that easy access to AI generators will vastly increase the amount of dross produced globally. But the reality is that an AI generator is much like a 'painting by numbers' kit. A practised user can create a beautiful work of art. But NOT an original one. The artist needs the numbers to guide him, the AI needs a database full of texts.

There are several websites full of free stories with more added every day. So why would anyone pay to read a story? The answer to that is the same as the answer to why AI generators won't ever replace good authors.

Replies:   Woofajuana
Woofajuana 🚫

@joyR

Fed the right combination of keywords the AI can generate a story, but that story won't be inspired by imagination, it will be a miss mash of stories already loaded into the AI's data bank.

The majority of the population doesn't even know what imagination is anymore. They have no idea how to spot it, or even to care. Our world is so full of the artifical that there are people I know who have no idea what a strawberry or grape actually tastes like since the candy is all they've known (plus the real ones are gross these days).

It is blatantly obvious that easy access to AI generators will vastly increase the amount of dross produced globally.

Just like mass production filled our planet with plastic crap to the point there's a literal floating trash island, it will fill the digital space to overflowing with trash. I know the digital space isn't as finite as our blue marble, but the visible part to the average user is quite small and that's the part we should worry about getting over run. A "hate read" is still a read, and that's how many of these AI generated content get clicks, straight up hate, but negative attention is still attention, and attention puts them on the front page for everyone else to "hate read."

There are several websites full of free stories with more added every day. So why would anyone pay to read a story? The answer to that is the same as the answer to why AI generators won't ever replace good authors.

I feel the issue with this is the same one all good professions have suffered. I have a mild interest in learning wood working. But, why even bother trying to learn when the only way to sell man made woodwork is if you're a top master already? It can only be a hobby at best, and I've already got a million other things on my plate. I wouldn't pay $2k for a table made by a person when I can buy a plastic one that doesn't need special care for under $100. People will buy the 10 cent AI crap and get 50 stories for the price of one human written novel. It's not that human authors will disappear. You can still hire calligraphers, but I've never met one. It's more about the fact that writing will have a barrier for new writers, and true writing will become as rare as those who hand carve canoes from a tree trunk. Do they exist? Of course. There's a huge number of people waiting for the world to end to finally put these skills to use. If I was just getting into writing today, I'd be massively discouraged by the complete lack of reader comments and interaction, and I mean that across all platforms. I post to 5 other sites and out of them all I have only 1 reader who regularly comments and interacts with me, even though collectively my stories generate thousands of views. Occasionally, I'll get one or two pop up if they're really excited or if I disappear for a long time, but that's not feed back and that's what young writers and artists and musicians need to get better. I have no idea if I'm actually a good writer or not because, well, no one says anything! I just go off my own ego, at this point. I think that's the more immediate threat to writing and art from AI. Yes, it may be another 50 years before the AI is writing well, but in the meantime, with our already depressed and hopeless society, the biggest threat is going to be "why bother?" And all the imagination and talent will be lost before it's ever known.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Woofajuana

I vaguely remember a music executive claiming that AI is a good thing because, by feeding the works of eg Taylor Swift into it, AI will supply a steady stream of original and innovative works.

AJ

Dominions Son 🚫

@Woofajuana

there's a literal floating trash island

No, there's not.
https://education.nationalgeographic.org/resource/great-pacific-garbage-patch/

For many people, the idea of a "garbage patch" conjures up images of an island of trash floating on the ocean. In reality, these patches are almost entirely made up of tiny bits of plastic, called microplastics. Microplastics can't always be seen by the naked eye. Even satellite imagery doesn't show a giant patch of garbage. The microplastics of the Great Pacific Garbage Patch can simply make the water look like a cloudy soup. This soup is intermixed with larger items, such as fishing gear and shoes.

Replies:   Woofajuana
Woofajuana 🚫

@Dominions Son

All you really gotta do is type in "garbage patch ocean" and there's hundreds of images of said garbage patch, and while yes, many may very well be AI generated (another major issue for AI), I know not all of them are. There's also many other articles about the sheer size and density of said patch, and it's not microplastics.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫
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@Woofajuana

You don't like National Geographic as a source, here's an actual published scientific article.

https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-018-22939-w

We estimated that an area of 1.6 million km2 holds ocean plastic concentrations ranging from 10 s to 100 s kg kmβˆ’2 (Fig. 3).

hundreds of kilograms of debris per square kilometer of ocean is a very long way from anything that can be honestly described as an island.

All the images on line showing a garbage island are fake. Every last one.

Replies:   DBActive
DBActive 🚫

@Dominions Son

They are not exactly fake. What they do is corral floating debris into a small area and photo it. Then the imply that it is representative of the entire area.

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Dominions Son 🚫
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@DBActive

What they do is corral floating debris into a small area and photo it.

I would argue that is faking it, you just aren't faking it in post processing.

Also, that's not going to create something anywhere near dense enough for someone to stand on, which is what describing it as an "island" is intended to imply.

Marius-6 🚫

@Woofajuana

If I was just getting into writing today, I'd be massively discouraged by the complete lack of reader comments and interaction, and I mean that across all platforms. I post to 5 other sites and out of them all I have only 1 reader who regularly comments and interacts with me, even though collectively my stories generate thousands of views. Occasionally, I'll get one or two pop up if they're really excited or if I disappear for a long time, but that's not feed back and that's what young writers and artists and musicians need to get better. I have no idea if I'm actually a good writer or not because, well, no one says anything!

I was going to post a Comment on one of your stories...

But I can't find any on SoL.

Please post some of your stories here. I find that it is common to get feedback, or at least Comments. As long as you remember to Enable Comments for your stories.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Marius-6

I was going to post a Comment on one of your stories...

But I can't find any on SoL.

Authors don't have to use their pen-name on the forum.

irvmull 🚫

@Woofajuana

The majority of the population doesn't even know what imagination is anymore.

Exactly my experience with pretty much anyone under 30 and/or still living in mom's basement.

No imagination - just buy what all your friends have - whether you need it or not. When it breaks, order another online.

No imagination means readers are unable to temporarily immerse themselves in your story. First time they encounter something new to them, they'll give up reading. They'll be unable or unwilling to figure it out, because without imagination there's no curiosity, and no incentive to even bother trying.

That's bad news for writers, but even worse news for civilization.

Remember, many, if not most, of the things that allow people to live comfortable, well-fed lives were invented two or three hundred years ago, by people who were curious and had imagination.

Now, it seems like the most "innovative" thing to do is to take anything invented years ago, stick an "i" on the front of the name, and get rich.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Woofajuana

The majority of the population doesn't even know what imagination is anymore.

Which seems an appropriate place to drop this link. ;-)

AJ

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Which seems an appropriate place to drop this link. ;-)

"AI just beat a human test for creativity. What does that even mean?"

My $0.02: It means we just proved we don't know how to measure creativity.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Dominions Son

It means we just proved we don't know how to measure creativity.

The twiddly bits around the Norwegian fjords were pretty creative ;-)

AJ

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joyR 🚫

@awnlee jawking

For which he won an award…!!!

Radagast 🚫

@awnlee jawking

DON'T PANIC.

irvmull 🚫

@Justin Case

-Real writers art will face extinction due to the ease that lazy people can create fluff.

Perhaps the continued decline in literacy will have the same effect.

Paladin_HGWT 🚫
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@Justin Case

Real authors will be waysided by gozillions of illiterate hacks flooding the market with trash.

-Real authors will be replaced (for the most part) by anyone with an AI generator.

-Real writers art will face extinction due to the ease that lazy people can create fluff.

Desktop computers replaced typewriters and carbon copies, significantly improving writing. (Editing and saving previous versions of stories, depended upon the knowledge of individuals, and capabilities of hardware and software.) Desktop publishing has been around for more than 30 years. Many people said similar, if not identical things about Desktop Publishing.

Hackers will Hack! Slackers will Slack!

If an individual lacks talent, better Tools aren't much help. Consider how many decent writers here (myself included) make errors despite using spelling and grammar tools. People who don't know how to tell a story might discard a "gem" and publish the dross because they don't know any better.

In my opinion the better AI written stories will be on par with the later works of Raymond Fiest. His first couple of stories were quite good, I recognized the actual history he cribbed from; but they were "original" works of fiction. His later stories might have been hacked by AI a "word salad" of regurgitating his previous words, and diminished his earlier stories by being set in the same world, but with changes that made no sense. (He cribbed from different history, period and culture, yet set in the same locations of previous stories. (Imagine a follow-up to Lord of the Rings, with a "French" kingdom between the Shire and Bree!)

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merlyn2748 🚫

@Paladin_HGWT

I agree, I think AI can help aspiring authors clarify and build better stories, but the true greats are still going to stand head and shoulders above the rest of us. If anything, I think AI will help the lower quality writers (like me) to do a better job, kind of like spell checkers do.

awnlee jawking 🚫
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@Justin Case

Top (allegedly) crime writer Ajay Chowdhury uses AI help write his novels: BBC, Daily Mail

AJ (no relation)

irvmull 🚫

@Justin Case

Does anyone have an example of an AI-created story that includes dialog between 2 or more people?

awnlee jawking 🚫

@irvmull

Does anyone have an example of an AI-created story that includes dialog between 2 or more people?

I'd love to see it too. It's so difficult to do well that I imagine an AI would be dire. Without some form of sentience, how would it know to check that each piece of dialogue is readily associable with its speaker, without readers having to backtrack.

AJ

Mat Twassel 🚫

@irvmull

In the last two or three months I've done some experimenting with Chat-Gpt, and though seldom does dialogue appear, Chat-Gpt can do dialogue. The other day I wrote a little story about a young couple who count bunnies on their morning runs. I summarized the heart of the story in a prompt to Chat-Gpt, with a request for dialogue.

Prompt:

During the late spring and early summer, Pia and Paul would go for a run through the forest and around the meadow just north of their college campus. As they ran, they would count the bunnies, which were plentiful. Pia would count the bunnies on her side of the trail, Paul the bunnies on his side. Back home, whoever had the most bunnies would be the winner for that day. But as summer drew to an end there were fewer and fewer bunnies. One day the tally was zero to zero. "This is ridiculous," Pia complained. "We might as well be counting aardvarks." "Or elephants," Paul agreed. Please write the conversation Pia and Paul have about counting animals, concluding with their mutual decision to switch to squirrel.

Chat-Gpt reply:

Pia chuckled as she wiped her forehead with the back of her hand. "Well, zero to zero it is, then. I guess the bunnies have decided to play hide and seek with us today. We might as well have been counting aardvarks."

Paul sighed, looking around the meadow as if hoping a bunny might magically appear. "It's just not the same without the bunnies. I miss seeing those fluffy little creatures hopping around."

Pia nodded, sympathizing with his disappointment. "I know what you mean. But hey, there are plenty of other animals in the forest. We could count birds or butterflies instead."

Paul raised an eyebrow. "Birds are too quick, and butterflies are too unpredictable. We need something more... visible. Like elephants."

Pia punched Paul's shoulder, then pondered for a moment before her eyes lit up. "I've got it! What about squirrels? They're lively, abundant, and definitely easier to spot than these invisible bunnies."

Paul grinned, liking the idea. "Squirrels it is, then! We can start tomorrow. I bet I'll spot more squirrels than you."

Pia playfully nudged him. "Oh, you're on! Let's see who the true squirrel whisperer is."

And just like that, their disappointment about the disappearing bunnies transformed into excitement for their new animal counting adventure. The next day, armed with their tally counters and a newfound enthusiasm, Pia and Paul set off on their run through the forest, ready to count squirrels and declare a new winner for the day.

(As you might suspect, my prompt did not include the reward that went to the victor.)

Replies:   JoeBobMack
JoeBobMack 🚫

@Mat Twassel

Thanks for recounting your experiment. This matches my experience. The ChatGPT, both in its output and the way it responds to differently worded prompts, is a VERY different thing from what's gone before.

irvmull 🚫

@Justin Case

After considerable searching, I found some examples, along with critiques:
https://www.nownovel.com/blog/dialogue-writing-examples/

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@irvmull

Thank you, interesting reading. The AI-generated dialogue was better than I expected, but it looked as though if had been written by a committee of writing experts.

ETA - the same resource contains a guide to writing multi-person dialogue. It's rather basic and I don't agree with all of it but it's not awful.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

a guide to writing multi-person dialogue

Multi-person dialogue isn't that an oxymoron?
Dialogue means two talking. If only one is talking its a monologue.
With more than two talking it should be named either multilogue or oligologue, depending on the number of persons involved. ;-)

HM.

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@helmut_meukel

Multi-person dialogue isn't that an oxymoron?

Not according to my dictionary. Etymologically the 'di' isn't a prefix meaning two, the whole word derives from an ancient Greek word meaning 'converse with'.

And yet monologue also derives from an ancient Greek word, meaning 'converse alone'.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

Etymologically the 'di' isn't a prefix meaning two,

No but dia is. Dia[logue], Mono[logue].

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@Keet

My understanding is that if the prefix came from ancient Greek meaning two, it should be duologue.

ETA: the word duologue exists and means a dialogue between two people.

The Greek prefix dia means through or across, cf diameter.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

My understanding is that if the prefix came from ancient Greek meaning two, it should be duologue.

ETA: the word duologue exists and means a dialogue between two people.

The Greek prefix dia means through or across, cf diameter.

Yes, a little misunderstanding. I didn't mean that "dia" represents "two". I meant that "di" isn't the prefix in "dialogue" but "dia". The word dialogue literally means "through speech". This also means that a dialogue can be between more than two people.

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@Keet

The word dialogue literally means "through speech". This also means that a dialogue can be between more than two people.

Wouldn't that cover a monologue, at least in a case where the speaker has an audience?

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@Dominions Son

Wouldn't that cover a monologue, at least in a case where the speaker has an audience?

Monologue is just a specific type of dialogue: just one person talking. Same with Duologue: two people talking to each other. Dialogue is just an undefined number of people talking although there is the (incorrect) general perception that a dialogue is between two people.

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@Keet

My dictionary specifies two or more, which is what you'd expect from its etymology.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

My understanding is that if the prefix came from ancient Greek meaning two, it should be duologue.

It's worth noting that just because we may know the linguistic origin of a word or part of a word does not mean that it retains the same meaning or usage. Words, sounds, and structures do evolve over time.

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@Justin Case

Wouldn't that cover a monologue, at least in a case where the speaker has an audience?

It would. That's why the word monologue was invented, so people would know to sit down, shut up, and listen.

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@Justin Case

So…
After all the replies… it seems that AI is 'STILL' nothing but plagiarized compilations of words written by actual human authors, then 'cut&pasted' and presented as 'original works' by untalented charlatans and thieves of other peoples work.

Nothing posted above changes that definition at all.
Even Kindle Publishers agrees.

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@Justin Case

Worth noting that AI created art has been declared "not copyrightable" by a US court [Stephen Thaler v. Shira Perlmutter, (1:22-cv-01564) (June 2, 2022)].

I don't think there's been a precedent-setting challenge about AI text yet, but there's no reason to assume it'll go a different way.

No copyright means no means of protecting a work even if an AI does come up with something new which means that releasing the text as anything other than a proof of concept or part of a scientific study would be counter-productive.

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@Dicrostonyx

That would be an interesting situation.

Several famous dead tree authors have admitted to using AI to generate scenes which they have then adapted for inclusion in their stories. Would that invalidate copyright on the whole book or just the scene in question? And how could anyone tell if the authors don't admit it?

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

which they have then adapted

That means they made it their own so it would be copyrighted.

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@awnlee jawking

Neither. It's an idea that was presented to the author which they then adapted into their own story.

I don't see how that's any different than a dozen different authors all using the same prompt to write short stories on a theme.

Each individual author is still writing their own story in their style, the fact that the underlying concept was generated by an AI rather than an editor or fan is irrelevant. What matters is the created work.

A famous example of this is the Codex Alera series by Jim Butcher. At the Del Rey Online Writer's Workshop (06 March 2001 - 05 April 2002), Butcher was challenged to write a good story based on a "lame idea" and he said he'd do it based on two ideas of the challenger's choosing. The ideas chosen were "Lost Roman Legion", and "PokΓ©mon".

Out of that we got a 6-book series about Roman-descended elementalists battling an invasion by an alien hive mind which is probably one of the most unusual stories to enter fantasy in decades. The series was Butcher's first hard cover releases and three titles were on the NYT best-seller list with the last book peaking at #7.

Is that writing achievement lessened because it was based on a silly idea? No. Did Nintendo sue Butcher for taking using the "Gotta catch them all" idea as inspiration for human magic? Also no. It's the writing that matters, not the idea.

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@Dicrostonyx

It's an idea that was presented to the author which they then adapted into their own story.

I'm pretty sure it's more than just an 'idea', more like generating a whole scene then changing a few words to be more compatible.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

I'm pretty sure it's more than just an 'idea', more like generating a whole scene then changing a few words to be more compatible.

I would be more extensive than that. I've played around with AI specifically set up for writing stories in cooperation with a human author.

It's not like others have said, copying bits and pieces from various pre existing works.

It's more like a random word generator that then gets run through a filter to produce something remotely comprehensible.

It will do odd things like have a character doing a mundane every day task with multiple steps but it puts the steps out of order. Like a person undressing and taking pants off before taking off their shoes.

It will start a scene with a person preparing a meal and switch what is being prepared in the middle of a paragraph.

It can't keep character relationships straight for more than a few paragraphs.

The amount of manual intervention needed to get a coherent story is significant.

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@Dominions Son

One example I read was where the author had never been to a certain country so tasked an AI with writing a specific scene set in that country for inclusion in his book to save him the job of looking up the amount of detail to make it seem authentic.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

One example I read was where the author had never been to a certain country so tasked an AI with writing a specific scene set in that country for inclusion in his book to save him the job of looking up the amount of detail to make it seem authentic.

I will note that doesn't say he didn't have to do a lot of manual cleanup on the output from the AI.

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@Dominions Son

He specified the scene's plot details and he wouldn't know how to clean up the location-specific details so there couldn't have been too much cleanup.

Mind you, if it was James Patterson (it wasn't), the AI could probably write it better ;-)

Imagine asking an AI to generate a picture of the Mona Lisa naked. I would expect a parallel with that analogy.

AJ

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@awnlee jawking

he wouldn't know how to clean up the location-specific details so there couldn't have been too much cleanup.

No, not location-specific details, but there could be a lot else to clean up. Sequence of events problems, consistency problems, otherwise garbled sentences.

Like I said, I've played with an AI supposedly optimized for writing stories. I could never get much more than a paragraph or two out of it without needing some kind of manual intervention.

I set up a scene with a mother and teen son. A paragraph and a half in to AI generated text, it had the son going to work.

It couldn't keep the ages of characters straight, it couldn't keep their relationships straight, it couldn't keep their occupations straight. These are not location specific details.

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@Dominions Son

To be fair to the AI, there are some authors here who seem to have trouble keeping details straight too, although that's more common with the longer serials.

It got cleaned up eventually, but in one of the earlier versions of aroslav's Living Next Door to Heaven the protagonist's height kept yo-yoing between 5'5" and 5'7".

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@Dicrostonyx

there are some authors here who seem to have trouble keeping details straight too

Over a span of just a few paragraphs?

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@Dominions Son

No, chapter to chapter. Although I recall Lumpy having some issues like that in their first story.

Not sure if it was ever fixed, but I recall a scene where the protagonist was planning to visit his adoptive sister on a Saturday since her mother would be at work, then the next paragraph when he goes by the house he's surprised that the mother's car isn't in the driveway.

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@Dominions Son

Over a span of just a few paragraphs?

Even paragraph to paragraph. And, TBH, I'm enjoying one such story despite the lack of proofreading/editing.

AJ

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